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Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other

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On Thu, 16 Dec 2021 15:37:51 +1300, Titus G <noone@nowhere.com> wrote:

>On 15/12/21 2:20 pm, Dorothy J Heydt wrote:
>> In article <nsdirg5mbr2ffnvkkflaqvdq1j343ngf04@4ax.com>,
>> Capuchin  <Capuchin@jymes.com> wrote:
>>> On Wed, 15 Dec 2021 06:59:39 +1300, Titus G <noone@nowhere.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> On 14/12/21 3:58 pm, Capuchin wrote:
>>>>> The blackjack dealer slid a card from the shoe to the square in front
>>>>> of me and then took one for herself. My other knew I had a queen and
>>>>> she a six, but to maintain my disguise as a normal person, I lifted
>>>>> the corner of mine for a quick peek. The next cards, dealt face up,
>>>>> were an eight for me and a jack for her. 
>snip
>
>> Oh, no.  It's perfectly intelligible prose.
>> 
>> Now go write the rest of it.
>
>I would be interested in reading more.
>
Thanks! 

All I have to do is learn a new way to write, get the muse talking to
me again, and keep my computer from dying unexpectedly, and I'm good
to go for another thousand words or so.

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[Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-13 20:58 -0600
  Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other djheydt@kithrup.com (Dorothy J Heydt) - 2021-12-14 14:38 +0000
    Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-14 10:27 -0600
      Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other djheydt@kithrup.com (Dorothy J Heydt) - 2021-12-14 16:51 +0000
        Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-14 18:27 -0600
      Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Don <g@crcomp.net> - 2021-12-14 17:29 +0000
        Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-14 18:32 -0600
        Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Joy Beeson <jbeeson@invalid.net.invalid> - 2021-12-18 22:48 -0500
          Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-22 18:00 -0600
  Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Titus G <noone@nowhere.com> - 2021-12-15 06:59 +1300
    Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-14 18:34 -0600
      Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other djheydt@kithrup.com (Dorothy J Heydt) - 2021-12-15 01:20 +0000
        Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-15 16:00 -0600
          Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other djheydt@kithrup.com (Dorothy J Heydt) - 2021-12-16 02:03 +0000
        Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Titus G <noone@nowhere.com> - 2021-12-16 15:37 +1300
          Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-16 16:37 -0600
    Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other BCFD36 <bcfd36@cruzio.com> - 2021-12-15 16:27 -0800
      Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-15 19:03 -0600
        Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other "Gary R. Schmidt" <grschmidt@acm.org> - 2021-12-16 13:10 +1100
          Re: [Crit] and discussion -- My Other Capuchin <Capuchin@jymes.com> - 2021-12-16 16:35 -0600

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