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Re: Code review

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Date Tue, 4 Nov 2014 22:23:39 -0800
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>Jean-Michel wrote:
>replace
> if left_to_act is None:
>    left_to_act = []
>  self.left_to_act = left_to_act
>by
>  self.left_to_act = left_to_act or []

I read that with 2.7 that I had to initialize class variables to
immutable types. I think because I was working with the lists before
they had been altered and were still empty lists. I will mess around
tomorrow with the classes you suggested as I have yet to make use of
decorators. Thanks.

I will work on putting some more comments in as well.


On Tue, Nov 4, 2014 at 4:09 PM,  <sohcahtoa82@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Tuesday, November 4, 2014 12:35:32 PM UTC-8, John Gordon wrote:
>> C Smith <illusiontechniques@gmail.com> writes:
>>
>> > I was wondering if I could get some feedback on the biggest thing I
>> > have done as an amateur Python coder.
>>
>> Comments.
>>
>> You need a *lot* more comments.
>>
>> Like, every line or two of code should have a comment explaining what is
>> being accomplished.  Seriously.  Every line or two.
>>
>> Some blank lines wouldn't hurt either.
>>
>> Also it would be nice to define some of the terms you're using.  What is
>> a blind?  What does "in front" mean?  What is a "muck hand"?
>>
>> --
>> John Gordon         Imagine what it must be like for a real medical doctor to
>> gordon@panix.com    watch 'House', or a real serial killer to watch 'Dexter'.
>
> A "blind" is a required bet that the two people sitting to the left of the button have to make before a hand begins.  The first player pays the small blind and the second player pays the big blind, which is double the small blind.  For tournament games, the blinds increase periodically.
>
> Mucking a hand means to throw your cards away without revealing them.  In professional Poker, you typically give them to the dealer.
>
> "In front" just refers to table position which determines play order.
> --
> https://mail.python.org/mailman/listinfo/python-list

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Code review C Smith <illusiontechniques@gmail.com> - 2014-11-04 07:28 -0800
  Re: Code review John Gordon <gordon@panix.com> - 2014-11-04 20:35 +0000
    Re: Code review sohcahtoa82@gmail.com - 2014-11-04 16:09 -0800
      Re: Code review C Smith <illusiontechniques@gmail.com> - 2014-11-04 22:23 -0800

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