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Badass flowers

Started by"J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com>
First post2015-08-23 09:42 -0400
Last post2015-09-03 16:55 -0700
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  Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 09:42 -0400
    Re: Badass flowers "Mike Dworetsky" <platinum198@pants.btinternet.com> - 2015-08-23 14:54 +0100
      Re: Badass flowers djheydt@kithrup.com (Dorothy J Heydt) - 2015-08-23 15:44 +0000
        Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 12:27 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers Bill Dugan <wkdugan@ix.netcom.com> - 2015-08-23 10:39 -0700
            Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 15:01 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers David Johnston <David@block.net> - 2015-08-23 12:55 -0600
      Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 12:18 -0400
      Re: Badass flowers Wolffan <AKWolffan@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 12:48 -0400
        Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-08-23 12:57 -0500
          Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 15:02 -0400
            Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-08-23 22:30 -0500
              Re: Badass flowers ted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>) - 2015-08-24 03:43 +0000
                Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-24 06:59 -0400
                Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-24 18:41 -0400
                Re: Badass flowers Robert Bannister <robban@clubtelco.com> - 2015-08-25 11:18 +0800
              Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-25 19:42 -0400
        Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 15:00 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-23 15:42 -0700
            Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 19:19 -0400
              Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 19:29 -0400
                Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-23 23:27 -0700
              Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-23 17:39 -0700
                Re: Badass flowers Magewolf <Magewolf@nc.rr.com> - 2015-08-24 15:07 -0400
                  Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-24 13:00 -0700
                    Re: Badass flowers Robert Bannister <robban@clubtelco.com> - 2015-08-25 11:20 +0800
                  Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-24 18:01 -0400
              Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-23 23:24 -0700
                Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-24 22:37 -0700
              Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-24 18:44 -0400
                Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-24 18:19 -0700
                  Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-25 00:31 -0400
                    Re: Badass flowers "nuny@bid.nes" <Alien8752@gmail.com> - 2015-08-24 23:11 -0700
                      Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-26 16:59 -0700
                Re: Badass flowers Dimensional Traveler <dtravel@sonic.net> - 2015-08-24 18:27 -0700
                  Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-25 00:33 -0400
                    Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-25 06:17 -0700
                    Re: Badass flowers petertrei@gmail.com - 2015-08-25 06:53 -0700
                      Re: Badass flowers Robert Bannister <robban@clubtelco.com> - 2015-08-26 11:53 +0800
                        Re: Badass flowers nance@math.ohio-state.edu (Anthony Nance) - 2015-08-26 18:44 +0000
                          Re: Badass flowers Dimensional Traveler <dtravel@sonic.net> - 2015-08-26 12:43 -0700
                          Re: Badass flowers Robert Bannister <robban@clubtelco.com> - 2015-08-27 10:34 +0800
                    Re: Badass flowers Dimensional Traveler <dtravel@sonic.net> - 2015-08-25 07:42 -0700
                  Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-24 22:46 -0700
                    Re: Badass flowers Gene Wirchenko <genew@telus.net> - 2015-08-25 19:43 -0700
          Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 02:26 -0600
            Re: Badass flowers Jack Bohn <jack.bohn64@gmail.com> - 2015-08-24 15:19 -0700
              Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-24 18:51 -0400
                Re: Badass flowers Jack Bohn <jack.bohn64@gmail.com> - 2015-08-25 06:43 -0700
                  Re: Badass flowers "nuny@bid.nes" <Alien8752@gmail.com> - 2015-08-25 09:53 -0700
                  Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-25 19:46 -0400
        Re: Badass flowers Ahasuerus <ahasuerus@email.com> - 2015-08-23 13:37 -0700
          Re: Badass flowers ted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>) - 2015-08-23 21:00 +0000
            Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 18:28 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 18:23 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers Cryptoengineer <treifamily@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 18:34 -0500
        Re: Badass flowers lal_truckee <lal_truckee@yahoo.com> - 2015-08-24 08:24 -0700
          Re: Badass flowers Don Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net> - 2015-08-24 16:04 +0000
            Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 12:51 -0600
      Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 02:05 -0600
        Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 02:09 -0600
    Re: Badass flowers ted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>) - 2015-08-23 17:11 +0000
      Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-08-23 13:01 -0500
      Re: Badass flowers Butch Malahide <fred.galvin@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 15:44 -0700
        Re: Badass flowers Butch Malahide <fred.galvin@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 16:03 -0700
    Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-23 10:24 -0700
    Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-08-23 12:55 -0500
    Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-23 14:33 -0400
      Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 15:04 -0400
      Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-25 16:25 -0400
    Re: Badass flowers patmpowers@gmail.com - 2015-08-23 12:14 -0700
      Re: Badass flowers Dimensional Traveler <dtravel@sonic.net> - 2015-08-23 16:24 -0700
      Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-24 13:39 -0700
        Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-24 13:57 -0700
          Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-08-25 13:11 -0400
    Re: Badass flowers Shawn Wilson <ikonoqlast@gmail.com> - 2015-08-23 16:33 -0700
      Re: Badass flowers David Johnston <David@block.net> - 2015-08-24 10:16 -0600
    Re: Badass flowers Don Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net> - 2015-08-24 01:29 +0000
      Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-24 01:04 -0400
        Re: Badass flowers Stephen Harker <sjharker@netspace.net.au> - 2015-08-24 17:56 +1000
          Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-24 17:56 -0400
        Re: Badass flowers Don Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net> - 2015-08-25 15:28 +0000
          Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-25 19:57 -0400
            Re: Badass flowers Butch Malahide <fred.galvin@gmail.com> - 2015-08-25 18:19 -0700
              Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-25 21:17 -0700
                Re: Badass flowers ted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>) - 2015-08-26 04:24 +0000
                  Re: Badass flowers petertrei@gmail.com - 2015-08-26 06:12 -0700
                    Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-26 06:44 -0700
                      Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-26 08:58 -0600
                      Re: Badass flowers Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> - 2015-08-26 15:38 +0000
                        Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-26 09:27 -0700
                          Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-01 06:20 -0700
                        Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-26 12:54 -0400
                          Re: Badass flowers Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> - 2015-08-26 17:11 +0000
                            Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-26 18:19 -0400
                              Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-26 16:46 -0600
                                Re: Badass flowers Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> - 2015-08-26 22:59 +0000
                                Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-26 19:01 -0400
                                  Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-27 14:20 -0600
                                    Re: Badass flowers Lawrence Watt-Evans <lwe@sff.net> - 2015-08-27 17:28 -0400
                                      Re: Badass flowers Don Bruder <dakidd@sonic.net> - 2015-08-27 16:53 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-27 17:17 -0700
                                      Re: Badass flowers "nuny@bid.nes" <Alien8752@gmail.com> - 2015-08-27 23:07 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers ted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>) - 2015-08-28 06:20 +0000
                                          Re: Badass flowers Lawrence Watt-Evans <lwe@sff.net> - 2015-08-28 04:07 -0400
                                            Re: Badass flowers ted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>) - 2015-08-28 15:32 +0000
                                          Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-28 10:35 -0400
                                      Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-28 03:46 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-08-28 06:47 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers Dimensional Traveler <dtravel@sonic.net> - 2015-08-28 17:23 -0700
                                      Re: Badass flowers petertrei@gmail.com - 2015-08-28 06:19 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-08-28 22:33 -0500
                                          Re: Badass flowers Torbjorn Lindgren <tl@none.invalid> - 2015-08-30 22:01 +0000
                                            Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-08-31 05:07 -0500
                                    Re: Badass flowers "John F. Eldredge" <john@jfeldredge.com> - 2015-09-03 01:50 +0000
                                      Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-02 19:21 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-09-03 19:45 -0500
                                          Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-09-04 02:56 -0700
                              Re: Badass flowers Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> - 2015-08-26 22:52 +0000
                                Re: Badass flowers Lawrence Watt-Evans <lwe@sff.net> - 2015-08-27 02:53 -0400
                                Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-27 08:06 -0400
                                  Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-27 20:10 -0600
                          Re: Badass flowers "Robert A. Woodward" <robertaw@drizzle.com> - 2015-08-26 22:10 -0700
                            Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-27 01:18 -0400
                              Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-08-29 12:42 -0400
                                Re: Badass flowers "nuny@bid.nes" <Alien8752@gmail.com> - 2015-08-29 10:54 -0700
                                  Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-01 06:08 -0700
                                    Re: Badass flowers Robert Bannister <robban@clubtelco.com> - 2015-09-02 11:19 +0800
                                      Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-01 21:35 -0700
                                        Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-09-02 01:12 -0400
                                        Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-09-02 06:53 -0700
                                          Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-02 11:04 -0700
                                            Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-02 11:39 -0700
                                              Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-09-03 02:56 -0700
                                          Re: Badass flowers David DeLaney <daviddelaney@earthlink.net> - 2015-09-02 19:25 -0500
                                        Re: Badass flowers Robert Bannister <robban@clubtelco.com> - 2015-09-03 11:27 +0800
                                Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-29 13:10 -0700
                                  Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-08-29 17:41 -0400
                                    Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-31 04:09 -0700
                                      Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-08-31 13:43 -0400
                                        Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-09-01 07:38 -0700
                                          Re: Badass flowers Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> - 2015-09-01 08:08 -0700
                                      Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-31 14:14 -0400
                                        Re: Badass flowers Moriarty <blues95@ivillage.com> - 2015-08-31 14:55 -0700
                                      Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-09-02 17:17 -0400
                                  Re: Badass flowers "John F. Eldredge" <john@jfeldredge.com> - 2015-09-03 01:56 +0000
                                    Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-09-03 15:25 -0400
                                Re: Badass flowers Moriarty <blues95@ivillage.com> - 2015-08-31 14:46 -0700
                            Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-30 16:58 -0700
                              Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-30 17:09 -0700
                                Re: Badass flowers lal_truckee <lal_truckee@yahoo.com> - 2015-08-30 18:01 -0700
                                  Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-30 19:26 -0700
                              Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-30 20:12 -0400
                                Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-31 04:10 -0700
                                  Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-08-31 13:53 -0400
                                    Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-09-02 17:20 -0400
                                      Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-09-02 17:35 -0400
                                  Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-31 22:38 -0700
                                  Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-09-01 05:11 -0700
                                    Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-09-01 14:07 -0400
                                    Re: Badass flowers goldfarb@ocf.berkeley.edu (David Goldfarb) - 2015-09-02 05:18 +0000
                                      Re: Badass flowers William Vetter <mdhangton@gmail.com> - 2015-09-02 02:44 -0400
                              Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-30 21:18 -0400
                                Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-30 19:25 -0700
                                  Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-31 03:25 -0400
                      Re: Badass flowers Mart van de Wege <mvdwege@gmail.com> - 2015-08-27 11:11 +0200
                  Re: Badass flowers Robert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com> - 2015-08-26 09:01 -0700
                    Re: Badass flowers Lawrence Watt-Evans <lwe@sff.net> - 2015-08-26 15:01 -0400
                      Re: Badass flowers Don Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net> - 2015-08-30 03:37 +0000
                    Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-26 14:59 -0700
            Re: Badass flowers Don Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net> - 2015-08-26 03:25 +0000
    Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-23 23:31 -0700
      Re: Badass flowers "J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com> - 2015-08-24 07:09 -0400
    Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 02:02 -0600
    Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 02:59 -0600
    Re: Badass flowers Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> - 2015-08-24 03:14 -0600
    Re: Badass flowers nance@math.ohio-state.edu (Anthony Nance) - 2015-08-24 12:11 +0000
    Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-24 18:50 -0700
      Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-24 22:06 -0400
        Re: Badass flowers wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) - 2015-08-24 22:27 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> - 2015-08-24 22:54 -0400
          Re: Badass flowers Kay Shapero <kay@invalid.net> - 2015-08-24 22:42 -0700
    Re: Badass flowers Quadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca> - 2015-08-24 19:01 -0700
    Re: Badass flowers nance@math.ohio-state.edu (Anthony Nance) - 2015-08-26 18:47 +0000
    Re: Badass flowers JRStern <JRStern@foobar.invalid> - 2015-08-26 16:36 -0700
    Re: Badass flowers "John F. Eldredge" <john@jfeldredge.com> - 2015-09-03 01:34 +0000
    Re: Badass flowers JRStern <JRStern@foobar.invalid> - 2015-09-03 16:55 -0700

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#420997

From"J. Clarke" <j.clarke.873638@gmail.com>
Date2015-08-24 17:56 -0400
Message-ID<MPG.3044c5c3191d970d989adf@news.eternal-september.org>
In reply to#420949
In article <87fv39ktks.fsf@howitt.home>, sjharker@netspace.net.au 
says...
> 
> "Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> writes:
> 
> > On Mon, 24 Aug 2015 01:29:14 +0000 (UTC), Don Kuenz
> > <garbage@crcomp.net> wrote in<news:20150823c@crcomp.net> in
> > rec.arts.sf.written:
> >
> > [...]
> >
> >> As to your question, it seems that nobody mentioned the
> >> flora of Pyrrus [1] yet.
> >
> > Mentioned by Robert Carnegie eight hours before you.
> 
> One I haven't seen mentioned is most of the vegetation in _Hothouse_ by
> Brian Aldiss.  Likely it has been mentioned and I missed it.

I think it has--but anything by Aldiss is probably worth rementioning.

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#421071

FromDon Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net>
Date2015-08-25 15:28 +0000
Message-ID<20150825a@crcomp.net>
In reply to#420942
Brian M. Scott <b.scott@csuohio.edu> wrote:
> On Mon, 24 Aug 2015 01:29:14 +0000 (UTC), Don Kuenz
> <garbage@crcomp.net> wrote in<news:20150823c@crcomp.net> in
> rec.arts.sf.written:
>
> [...]
>
>> As to your question, it seems that nobody mentioned the
>> flora of Pyrrus [1] yet.
>
> Mentioned by Robert Carnegie eight hours before you.

Sure enough. (There's also the group's Pyrrus parlance zeitgeist. :) )

Did anyone mention the deadly flora from _Minority Report_, the movie?
The venomous vine of anger only appears in the Hollywood treatment, not
the novel.

    GARDENS

    Wild and out of control. A small ivy-covered STONE HOUSE is
    nestled into a corner of the property. Smoke rises from the
    chimney. Anderton starts down the other side of the wall.

    EXT. THE GARDENS - DAY

    As Anderton jumps to the ground. His shirt is ripped; his
    arms scratched from what he realizes are THORNS embedded in
    the vines.

    We hear RUSTLING as, behind Anderton, several of the plants
    unfurl to their full dimensions of eight feet and wrap their
    vines around Anderton's neck and torso.

    He breaks free. We hear CLASSICAL MUSIC O.S. and Anderton
    moves through the gardens towards it. He stops, dizzy,
    touches his forehead and then looks off at...

    A GREENHOUSE

    Where we see A WOMAN, 50, dressed in a wide-brimmed hat and
    gardening attire, attending to the plants, gently spraying,
    then wiping each leaf with a small, square cloth...

    Anderton staggers into the greenhouse, something now quite
    wrong with him.

                                 ANDERTON
              Dr. Hineman --

    Quick as a flash she holds up her cane and a six-inch BLADE
    extends from the tip to Anderton's throat. She looks down
    the length of it at Anderton, his ripped clothing, bruised
    face, and scratched arms.

                                  IRIS
              You're trespassing.

    He starts to sway, touches his forehead.

                                  IRIS
              Something wrong?

                                 ANDERTON
              I'm a little dizzy...

    She casually leans on the cane, shoving the blade back up inside.

                                  IRIS
              Yes, I'm afraid that would be from the Doll's Eye.

                                 ANDERTON
              The what?

                                  IRIS
              The vine -- the Baneberry that scratched you during
              your illegal climb over my wall...

    She leads Anderton over to a wooden table just inside the
    greenhouse where she's got AFTERNOON TEA set up.

                                  IRIS
              It's not a true Doll's Eye, of course, but a little
              hybrid of my own design.

    Anderton staggers, grabs hold of the table for support.

                                  IRIS
              It's quite something, once the poison gets into your
              bloodstream, you'll start to see what I can only
              describe as the most extraordinary display of blue
              objects.

    Anderton struggles. She watches him a moment.

                                  IRIS
              This just isn't your week, is it, Chief?

    He pulls his gun. She shakes her head...

                                  IRIS
                                Now now...

    She easily takes it away from him, jacks the clip onto the table,
    then calmly pours a cup of tea.

                                  IRIS
              You have three minutes to tell me what you're doing
              here before I feed you to a few of my more predacious
              plants.

--
 ,-.                              There was a young lady named Bright
 \_/                              Whose speed was far faster than light;
{|||)<   Don Kuenz KB7RPU            She set out one day
 / \                                 In a relative way
 `-'                              And returned on the previous night.

What you do speaks so loud that I can not hear what you say. - Emerson.

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#421100

Fromwdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr)
Date2015-08-25 19:57 -0400
Message-ID<mrive6$3fo$1@panix2.panix.com>
In reply to#421071
In article <20150825a@crcomp.net>,
Don Kuenz <garbage@crcomp.net> said:

> Did anyone mention the deadly flora from _Minority
> Report_, the movie?  The venomous vine of anger only
> appears in the Hollywood treatment, not the novel.
>
>    GARDENS
>
>    Wild and out of control. A small ivy-covered STONE HOUSE is
>    nestled into a corner of the property. Smoke rises from the
>    chimney. Anderton starts down the other side of the wall.
>
>    EXT. THE GARDENS - DAY
>
>    As Anderton jumps to the ground. His shirt is ripped; his
>    arms scratched from what he realizes are THORNS embedded in
>    the vines.
>
>    We hear RUSTLING as, behind Anderton, several of the plants
>    unfurl to their full dimensions of eight feet and wrap their
>    vines around Anderton's neck and torso.
>
>    He breaks free. We hear CLASSICAL MUSIC O.S. and Anderton
>    moves through the gardens towards it. He stops, dizzy,
>    touches his forehead and then looks off at...

etc.

I don't remember that scene from the movie as it was released to
theaters, but I don't absolutely trust my non-memory on that.

(Also, the 1956 Philip K. Dick story "The Minority Report"
was a novelette[1], and I don't think there was any novelization
of the movie.)

-----------
 *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
     awards rules said:

        Novel: 40,000 words or more
        Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
        Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
        Short story: less than 7,500 words

     I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
     the name of its category.

-- wds

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#421110

FromButch Malahide <fred.galvin@gmail.com>
Date2015-08-25 18:19 -0700
Message-ID<3b55a548-d497-4bfc-9aad-6c59b120b4c9@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#421100
On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
> -----------
>  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
>      awards rules said:
> 
>         Novel: 40,000 words or more
>         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
>         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
>         Short story: less than 7,500 words
> 
>      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
>      the name of its category.

Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.

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#421121

FromRobert Carnegie <rja.carnegie@excite.com>
Date2015-08-25 21:17 -0700
Message-ID<b3a8e40e-a395-4e97-973a-a4b427687f3e@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#421110
On Wednesday, 26 August 2015 02:20:02 UTC+1, Butch Malahide  wrote:
> On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
> > -----------
> >  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
> >      awards rules said:
> > 
> >         Novel: 40,000 words or more
> >         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
> >         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
> >         Short story: less than 7,500 words
> > 
> >      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
> >      the name of its category.
> 
> Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.

But you'd have to think of a longer way to say it.
Well, what you have might do, but "Micro Hugo" wouldn't.
And would that be "anterior" or "posterior"?

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#421122

Fromted@loft.tnolan.com (Ted Nolan <tednolan>)
Date2015-08-26 04:24 +0000
Message-ID<d44tb6FkfdrU1@mid.individual.net>
In reply to#421121
In article <b3a8e40e-a395-4e97-973a-a4b427687f3e@googlegroups.com>,
Robert Carnegie  <rja.carnegie@excite.com> wrote:
>On Wednesday, 26 August 2015 02:20:02 UTC+1, Butch Malahide  wrote:
>> On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
>> > -----------
>> >  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
>> >      awards rules said:
>> > 
>> >         Novel: 40,000 words or more
>> >         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
>> >         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
>> >         Short story: less than 7,500 words
>> > 
>> >      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
>> >      the name of its category.
>> 
>> Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.
>
>But you'd have to think of a longer way to say it.
>Well, what you have might do, but "Micro Hugo" wouldn't.
>And would that be "anterior" or "posterior"?

Hmm. "Micro Hugo" would be a unit of measurement, no?

If a Hugo Winning SF bestseller is a book that sells 
a million copies, then a micro hugo is the amount of
SF goodness required to sell one copy..
-- 
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What's not in Columbia anymore..

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#421133

Frompetertrei@gmail.com
Date2015-08-26 06:12 -0700
Message-ID<bfdca5e0-ae0a-4075-9f8b-57423c0e3598@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#421122
On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 12:24:10 AM UTC-4, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
> In article <b3a8e40e-a395-4e97-973a-a4b427687f3e@googlegroups.com>,
> Robert Carnegie  <rja.carnegie@excite.com> wrote:
> >On Wednesday, 26 August 2015 02:20:02 UTC+1, Butch Malahide  wrote:
> >> On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
> >> > -----------
> >> >  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
> >> >      awards rules said:
> >> > 
> >> >         Novel: 40,000 words or more
> >> >         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
> >> >         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
> >> >         Short story: less than 7,500 words
> >> > 
> >> >      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
> >> >      the name of its category.
> >> 
> >> Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.
> >
> >But you'd have to think of a longer way to say it.
> >Well, what you have might do, but "Micro Hugo" wouldn't.
> >And would that be "anterior" or "posterior"?
> 
> Hmm. "Micro Hugo" would be a unit of measurement, no?
> 
> If a Hugo Winning SF bestseller is a book that sells 
> a million copies, then a micro hugo is the amount of
> SF goodness required to sell one copy..

Sort of like the millihelen - the measure of female
pulchritude sufficient to launch a single ship.

pt

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#421135

FromKevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com>
Date2015-08-26 06:44 -0700
Message-ID<e5c3dd09-a1b2-41e4-b6d2-5e8de6d90145@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#421133
On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 9:13:03 AM UTC-4, pete...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 12:24:10 AM UTC-4, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
> > In article <b3a8e40e-a395-4e97-973a-a4b427687f3e@googlegroups.com>,
> > Robert Carnegie  <rja.carnegie@excite.com> wrote:
> > >On Wednesday, 26 August 2015 02:20:02 UTC+1, Butch Malahide  wrote:
> > >> On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
> > >> > -----------
> > >> >  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
> > >> >      awards rules said:
> > >> > 
> > >> >         Novel: 40,000 words or more
> > >> >         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
> > >> >         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
> > >> >         Short story: less than 7,500 words
> > >> > 
> > >> >      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
> > >> >      the name of its category.
> > >> 
> > >> Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.
> > >
> > >But you'd have to think of a longer way to say it.
> > >Well, what you have might do, but "Micro Hugo" wouldn't.
> > >And would that be "anterior" or "posterior"?
> > 
> > Hmm. "Micro Hugo" would be a unit of measurement, no?
> > 
> > If a Hugo Winning SF bestseller is a book that sells 
> > a million copies, then a micro hugo is the amount of
> > SF goodness required to sell one copy..
> 
> Sort of like the millihelen - the measure of female
> pulchritude sufficient to launch a single ship.
> 
> pt

I remember that one.

What's the official measurement of bad writing?  The Ecordian?

Kevin R

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#421138

FromGreg Goss <gossg@gossg.org>
Date2015-08-26 08:58 -0600
Message-ID<d462g8Ftbd0U2@mid.individual.net>
In reply to#421135
Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> wrote:
>On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 9:13:03 AM UTC-4, pete...@gmail.com wrote:

>What's the official measurement of bad writing?  The Ecordian?

The Vancouver annual SF convention hands out "Elron" awards.  Or at
least used to when I lived there.

The award was a gold-painted plastic lemon affixed to a spike through
a Gor novel.
-- 
We are geeks.  Resistance is voltage over current.

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#421140

FromMike M <mike@xenocyte.com>
Date2015-08-26 15:38 +0000
Message-ID<1106825777462295716.415387mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>
In reply to#421135
Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> wrote:
> On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 9:13:03 AM UTC-4, pete...@gmail.com wrote:
>> On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 12:24:10 AM UTC-4, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
>>> In article <b3a8e40e-a395-4e97-973a-a4b427687f3e@googlegroups.com>,
>>> Robert Carnegie  <rja.carnegie@excite.com> wrote:
>>>> On Wednesday, 26 August 2015 02:20:02 UTC+1, Butch Malahide  wrote:
>>>>> On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
>>>>>> -----------
>>>>>>  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
>>>>>>      awards rules said:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>         Novel: 40,000 words or more
>>>>>>         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
>>>>>>         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
>>>>>>         Short story: less than 7,500 words
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
>>>>>>      the name of its category.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.
>>>> 
>>>> But you'd have to think of a longer way to say it.
>>>> Well, what you have might do, but "Micro Hugo" wouldn't.
>>>> And would that be "anterior" or "posterior"?
>>> 
>>> Hmm. "Micro Hugo" would be a unit of measurement, no?
>>> 
>>> If a Hugo Winning SF bestseller is a book that sells 
>>> a million copies, then a micro hugo is the amount of
>>> SF goodness required to sell one copy..
>> 
>> Sort of like the millihelen - the measure of female
>> pulchritude sufficient to launch a single ship.
>> 
>> pt
> 
> I remember that one.
> 
> What's the official measurement of bad writing?  The Ecordian?
> 
The Theis. Each word written in The Eye of Argon is 1 Theis. However no one
knows how many Theis The Eye of Argon itself registers at, as despite its
word count remaining constant (give or take the ending), no-one has ever
been able to bring themselves to count them all.

-- 
So much universe, and so little time. - Sir Terry Pratchett

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#421150

FromKevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com>
Date2015-08-26 09:27 -0700
Message-ID<11b36e73-8ad1-448f-93ac-435f5e177ba5@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#421140
On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 11:38:07 AM UTC-4, Mike M wrote:
> Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> wrote:
> > On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 9:13:03 AM UTC-4, pete...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 12:24:10 AM UTC-4, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
> >>> In article <b3a8e40e-a395-4e97-973a-a4b427687f3e@googlegroups.com>,
> >>> Robert Carnegie  <rja.carnegie@excite.com> wrote:
> >>>> On Wednesday, 26 August 2015 02:20:02 UTC+1, Butch Malahide  wrote:
> >>>>> On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 at 6:58:02 PM UTC-5, William December Starr wrote:
> >>>>>> -----------
> >>>>>>  *1: The last time I looked, about four years ago, the Hugo
> >>>>>>      awards rules said:
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>>         Novel: 40,000 words or more
> >>>>>>         Novella: between 17,500 and 40,000 words
> >>>>>>         Novelette: between 7,500 and 17,500 words
> >>>>>>         Short story: less than 7,500 words
> >>>>>> 
> >>>>>>      I find it amusing that the shorter a story, the longer
> >>>>>>      the name of its category.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Too bad they don't have one for best short short story.
> >>>> 
> >>>> But you'd have to think of a longer way to say it.
> >>>> Well, what you have might do, but "Micro Hugo" wouldn't.
> >>>> And would that be "anterior" or "posterior"?
> >>> 
> >>> Hmm. "Micro Hugo" would be a unit of measurement, no?
> >>> 
> >>> If a Hugo Winning SF bestseller is a book that sells 
> >>> a million copies, then a micro hugo is the amount of
> >>> SF goodness required to sell one copy..
> >> 
> >> Sort of like the millihelen - the measure of female
> >> pulchritude sufficient to launch a single ship.
> >> 
> >> pt
> > 
> > I remember that one.
> > 
> > What's the official measurement of bad writing?  The Ecordian?
> > 
> The Theis. Each word written in The Eye of Argon is 1 Theis. However no one
> knows how many Theis The Eye of Argon itself registers at, as despite its
> word count remaining constant (give or take the ending), no-one has ever
> been able to bring themselves to count them all.

I figured to name it after Grignr the Ecordian.  we could use one name for
SI, the other for US Customary Units. :)

Theoretically, the entire mess rates as a MegaTheis?

I found another contender.  @

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amanda_McKittrick_Ros

The footnotes have this link:

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/uknews/1529100/Awful-author-addicted-to-alliteration-achieves-acclaim-again.html

use http://preview.tinyurl.com/AmandaMcKRos

or http://tinyurl.com/AmandaMcKRos

and this quote from it:

[quote]

Her novels provided the entertainment at gatherings of the Inklings, a group of Oxford dons including Lewis and J. R. R. Tolkien who met from the 1930s to 1950s. They competed to see who could read her work aloud for longest before starting to laugh.

[/quote]

Is this what inspired the Argon readings at cons?

Kevin R

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#421698

FromQuadibloc <jsavard@ecn.ab.ca>
Date2015-09-01 06:20 -0700
Message-ID<4a0753dc-7283-497a-8da2-31d2095ba78e@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#421150
On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 10:27:30 AM UTC-6, Kevrob wrote:

> I found another contender.  @
> 
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amanda_McKittrick_Ros
> 
> The footnotes have this link:
> 
> http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/uknews/1529100/Awful-author-addicted-to-alliteration-achieves-acclaim-again.html
> 
> use http://preview.tinyurl.com/AmandaMcKRos
> 
> or http://tinyurl.com/AmandaMcKRos
> 
> and this quote from it:
> 
> [quote]
> 
> Her novels provided the entertainment at gatherings of the Inklings, a group of Oxford dons including Lewis and J. R. R. Tolkien who met from the 1930s to 1950s. They competed to see who could read her work aloud for longest before starting to laugh.
> 
> [/quote]
> 
> Is this what inspired the Argon readings at cons?

Having looked up more information about her, I see her last novel, Helen 
Huddleston, was only published posthumously in 1969. Hence, we can leave it out 
as a possible source of inspiration for the game Cluedo, later sold under 
license in the U.S. as "Clue" by Parker Brothers.

John Savard

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#421154

From"Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu>
Date2015-08-26 12:54 -0400
Message-ID<1neshv80tqlrj.eibstakic32w$.dlg@40tude.net>
In reply to#421140
On 26 Aug 2015 15:38:03 GMT, Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com>
wrote
in<news:1106825777462295716.415387mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>
in rec.arts.sf.written:

> Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> wrote:

[...]

>> What's the official measurement of bad writing?  The
>> Ecordian?

> The Theis. Each word written in The Eye of Argon is 1
> Theis. However no one knows how many Theis The Eye of
> Argon itself registers at, as despite its word count
> remaining constant (give or take the ending), no-one has
> ever been able to bring themselves to count them all.

Unfair to Theis.  Yes, he swallowed a thesaurus instead of
learning how to use it, but there actually is a story
there.

Brian
-- 
It was the neap tide, when the baga venture out of their
holes to root for sandtatties.  The waves whispered
rhythmically over the packed sand: haggisss, haggisss,
haggisss.

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#421156

FromMike M <mike@xenocyte.com>
Date2015-08-26 17:11 +0000
Message-ID<2122021176462301606.848158mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>
In reply to#421154
"Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> wrote:
> On 26 Aug 2015 15:38:03 GMT, Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com>
> wrote
> in<news:1106825777462295716.415387mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>
> in rec.arts.sf.written:
> 
>> Kevrob <kevrob@my-deja.com> wrote:
> 
> [...]
> 
>>> What's the official measurement of bad writing?  The
>>> Ecordian?
> 
>> The Theis. Each word written in The Eye of Argon is 1
>> Theis. However no one knows how many Theis The Eye of
>> Argon itself registers at, as despite its word count
>> remaining constant (give or take the ending), no-one has
>> ever been able to bring themselves to count them all.
> 
> Unfair to Theis.  Yes, he swallowed a thesaurus instead of
> learning how to use it, but there actually is a story
> there.

The request was for a unit of bad writing, not bad plotting. There are many
dimensions to bad writing, for instance the unit of  "plodding prose" is
the DanBrown, the unit of "indigestible infodump" is the Clancy ...


-- 
So much universe, and so little time. - Sir Terry Pratchett

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#421168

Fromwdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr)
Date2015-08-26 18:19 -0400
Message-ID<mrle0l$j9l$1@panix2.panix.com>
In reply to#421156
In article <2122021176462301606.848158mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>,
Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> said:

> The request was for a unit of bad writing, not bad plotting. There
> are many dimensions to bad writing, for instance the unit of
> "plodding prose" is the DanBrown, the unit of "indigestible
> infodump" is the Clancy ...

Disagree with that last one.  Clancy had some bad problems once he
got too big to edit, but I never found that to be one of them.

-- wds

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#421170

FromGreg Goss <gossg@gossg.org>
Date2015-08-26 16:46 -0600
Message-ID<d46tulF5omaU3@mid.individual.net>
In reply to#421168
wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) wrote:

>In article <2122021176462301606.848158mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>,
>Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> said:
>
>> The request was for a unit of bad writing, not bad plotting. There
>> are many dimensions to bad writing, for instance the unit of
>> "plodding prose" is the DanBrown, the unit of "indigestible
>> infodump" is the Clancy ...
>
>Disagree with that last one.  Clancy had some bad problems once he
>got too big to edit, but I never found that to be one of them.

It's too bad we've already got a metric unit called a Weber.

-- 
I used to own a mind like a steel trap.
Perhaps if I'd specified a brass one, it
wouldn't have rusted like this.

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#421173

FromMike M <mike@xenocyte.com>
Date2015-08-26 22:59 +0000
Message-ID<1931086904462322510.584227mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>
In reply to#421170
Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> wrote:
> wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) wrote:
> 
>> In article <2122021176462301606.848158mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>,
>> Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> said:
>> 
>>> The request was for a unit of bad writing, not bad plotting. There
>>> are many dimensions to bad writing, for instance the unit of
>>> "plodding prose" is the DanBrown, the unit of "indigestible
>>> infodump" is the Clancy ...
>> 
>> Disagree with that last one.  Clancy had some bad problems once he
>> got too big to edit, but I never found that to be one of them.
> 
> It's too bad we've already got a metric unit called a Weber.

Heh. The infodumps there don't bother me as much as the interlocking
series. I find the little OCD demon in my head wanting to deconstruct the
last eight or so Honorverse books and put the scenes back together in as
close to chronological order as possible ... Which would also mean losing
at least 10,000 words of repeated chapters ...

-- 
So much universe, and so little time. - Sir Terry Pratchett

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#421174

From"Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu>
Date2015-08-26 19:01 -0400
Message-ID<7p9rb0p943ht.11wwium9anr7j.dlg@40tude.net>
In reply to#421170
On Wed, 26 Aug 2015 16:46:43 -0600, Greg Goss
<gossg@gossg.org> wrote
in<news:d46tulF5omaU3@mid.individual.net> in
rec.arts.sf.written:

> wdstarr@panix.com (William December Starr) wrote:

>> In article <2122021176462301606.848158mike-xenocyte.com@news.individual.net>,
>> Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> said:

[...]

>>> There are many dimensions to bad writing, for instance
>>> the unit of "plodding prose" is the DanBrown, the unit
>>> of "indigestible infodump" is the Clancy ...

>> Disagree with that last one.  Clancy had some bad
>> problems once he got too big to edit, but I never found
>> that to be one of them.

> It's too bad we've already got a metric unit called a
> Weber.

I’m not at all sure that I’ve ever encountered an
indigestible infodump.  Longer than necessary, yes; clumsy,
yes; but not indigestible.

Brian
-- 
It was the neap tide, when the baga venture out of their
holes to root for sandtatties.  The waves whispered
rhythmically over the packed sand: haggisss, haggisss,
haggisss.

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#421248

FromGreg Goss <gossg@gossg.org>
Date2015-08-27 14:20 -0600
Message-ID<d499paFnp8jU1@mid.individual.net>
In reply to#421174
"Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> wrote:
>On Wed, 26 Aug 2015 16:46:43 -0600, Greg Goss
>>> Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> said:

>>>> There are many dimensions to bad writing, for instance
>>>> the unit of "plodding prose" is the DanBrown, the unit
>>>> of "indigestible infodump" is the Clancy ...
>
>> It's too bad we've already got a metric unit called a
>> Weber.
>
>I’m not at all sure that I’ve ever encountered an
>indigestible infodump.  Longer than necessary, yes; clumsy,
>yes; but not indigestible.

I've got an ironclad info-stomach.  But I sometimes have to flip back
several pages to rejoin the conversation together.

Someone walks into the room; says something.
Focus character muses, turns into a four page info dump.
Focus character answers the person who walked in, and I have no idea
anymore what the conversation was.

Weber does this all the time.
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FromLawrence Watt-Evans <lwe@sff.net>
Date2015-08-27 17:28 -0400
Message-ID<110vta97pclp71gv1spd593vvgsed0cp0j@reader80.eternal-september.org>
In reply to#421248
On Thu, 27 Aug 2015 14:20:57 -0600, Greg Goss <gossg@gossg.org> wrote:

>"Brian M. Scott" <b.scott@csuohio.edu> wrote:
>>On Wed, 26 Aug 2015 16:46:43 -0600, Greg Goss
>>>> Mike M <mike@xenocyte.com> said:
>
>>>>> There are many dimensions to bad writing, for instance
>>>>> the unit of "plodding prose" is the DanBrown, the unit
>>>>> of "indigestible infodump" is the Clancy ...
>>
>>> It's too bad we've already got a metric unit called a
>>> Weber.
>>
>>I’m not at all sure that I’ve ever encountered an
>>indigestible infodump.  Longer than necessary, yes; clumsy,
>>yes; but not indigestible.
>
>I've got an ironclad info-stomach.  But I sometimes have to flip back
>several pages to rejoin the conversation together.
>
>Someone walks into the room; says something.
>Focus character muses, turns into a four page info dump.
>Focus character answers the person who walked in, and I have no idea
>anymore what the conversation was.
>
>Weber does this all the time.

This is not a new thing.  The Bhagavad Gita makes Weber look like a
beginner; virtually the entire book is an infodump of philosophy being
explained to Arjuna by Krishna on the eve of battle.  When I first
read it, I assumed that eventually we'd see the battle.

We don't.




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