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Here is my next poem

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First post2019-04-16 09:56 -0700
Last post2019-04-16 23:37 +0100
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  Here is my next poem Horizon68 <horizon@horizon.com> - 2019-04-16 09:56 -0700
    Re: Here is my next poem Chad <cdalten@gmail.com> - 2019-04-16 11:28 -0700
      Re: Here is my next poem "Apd" <not@all.invalid> - 2019-04-16 23:37 +0100

#9881 — Here is my next poem

FromHorizon68 <horizon@horizon.com>
Date2019-04-16 09:56 -0700
SubjectHere is my next poem
Message-ID<q951ge$9rl$3@dont-email.me>
Hello..


Here is my next poem:

More about my way of writing poetry..

I am a white arab, and i am a gentleman type of person and i am more 
sophisticated, why am i more sophisticated? because that's the way
of my writing that tells you about me, the way of my thoughts
tells you more about me, this is is why i am loving my kind of poetry,
because in my poetry i have to show like the right doses of
"wisdom" and "love" , this is the most important part of my
poetry, you have to know that i have never learned how to
write poetry, i am just "inventing" fast and writing fast my poems, but 
this is the right occasion that shows you how i am made from the inside, 
because i think that the inside of a person is really really important, 
this is why you have to feel my poems , because i am writing
them with my "inside", look for example at the way i am
writing them, this shows the kind of person i am, i am giving
more importance to "wisdom" and "love", but does those two words
model more correctly the way of morality ? i think yes, because wisdom 
is the quality of having experience, knowledge, and good judgment, and i 
think that wisdom gives laws and the way of politics etc. and when i say 
  logically both "wisdom" AND "Love" , it is understandable by logic 
that wisdom is constraining more to be to be in accordance with 
morality, this is why you will notice from my poems below that i am 
taking care of morality.


So i have to be more smart this is why i was listening
to the following song of Killing Me Softly With His Song ,
so i have just decided to smartly write a poem to show that i am also 
capable of writing beautiful poems, so here is my new poem,
read it listening at the same time at this beautiful song of
Fugees - Killing Me Softly With His Song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKOtzIo-uYw


And notice in my poem that i am using the word "Tempo",
so here is its meaning:

"The word tempo came into English by way of Italian, tracing all the way 
back to the Latin word tempus, meaning time. It was originally used to 
describe the timing of music, or the speed at which a piece of music is 
played. For example, a soothing song would be described as a slow tempo 
song. Tempo is still used in this way to describe music, but you’ll also 
hear it used to refer to pace or speed in general, as in — "the 
increased tempo at the end of a close basketball game" or "the slow 
tempo of action in a novel."

Read more here:

https://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/tempo


So here is my extended new poem:


I am a white arab nor a yellow nor a negro

As my studio is wanting from you to follow

As my game is a more sophisticated tempo

As my Tattoo is saying to you a beautiful hello

As i am participating for you to this beautiful show

As my beautiful heart and soul are climbing far from above

Since it is as it is a morality of the right dose

Since it is as Liberty is coming with the right effort

Since Liberty is what we have to adopt

Since it is as it is coming from the Lord

Since Liberty is justice and love and order

Since my Love is not the mess of desorder

Since my soul is made of a beautiful scent of amber

And thus the blues is making me dance

As the life is also a game of chance

And thus the blues is making me chant

Like an Ant that is doing his paint

Because it is as it is as infinite as we are told

Because it is as angels are talking from above

Because it is as it is a descent from the Lord

Since even our mirror is telling us hello and good evening

Because it is our destiny that is coming

Because it is our past that is calling

Because the new and old is coming and going

Because it's like a good morning and good evening

Because it is as our destiny that is running

Because progress is exponentially stepping

As wisdom is like the King

As it is the way of morality my darling



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.

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#9883

FromChad <cdalten@gmail.com>
Date2019-04-16 11:28 -0700
Message-ID<70421aeb-e2f5-4605-8660-1f41e4e386ed@googlegroups.com>
In reply to#9881
On Tuesday, April 16, 2019 at 9:56:48 AM UTC-7, Horizon68 wrote:
> Hello..
> 
> 
> Here is my next poem:
> 
> More about my way of writing poetry..
> 
> I am a white arab, and i am a gentleman type of person and i am more 
> sophisticated, why am i more sophisticated? because that's the way
> of my writing that tells you about me, the way of my thoughts
> tells you more about me, this is is why i am loving my kind of poetry,
> because in my poetry i have to show like the right doses of
> "wisdom" and "love" , this is the most important part of my
> poetry, you have to know that i have never learned how to
> write poetry, i am just "inventing" fast and writing fast my poems, but 
> this is the right occasion that shows you how i am made from the inside, 
> because i think that the inside of a person is really really important, 
> this is why you have to feel my poems , because i am writing
> them with my "inside", look for example at the way i am
> writing them, this shows the kind of person i am, i am giving
> more importance to "wisdom" and "love", but does those two words
> model more correctly the way of morality ? i think yes, because wisdom 
> is the quality of having experience, knowledge, and good judgment, and i 
> think that wisdom gives laws and the way of politics etc. and when i say 
>   logically both "wisdom" AND "Love" , it is understandable by logic 
> that wisdom is constraining more to be to be in accordance with 
> morality, this is why you will notice from my poems below that i am 
> taking care of morality.
> 
> 
> So i have to be more smart this is why i was listening
> to the following song of Killing Me Softly With His Song ,
> so i have just decided to smartly write a poem to show that i am also 
> capable of writing beautiful poems, so here is my new poem,
> read it listening at the same time at this beautiful song of
> Fugees - Killing Me Softly With His Song:
> 
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKOtzIo-uYw
> 
> 
> And notice in my poem that i am using the word "Tempo",
> so here is its meaning:
> 
> "The word tempo came into English by way of Italian, tracing all the way 
> back to the Latin word tempus, meaning time. It was originally used to 
> describe the timing of music, or the speed at which a piece of music is 
> played. For example, a soothing song would be described as a slow tempo 
> song. Tempo is still used in this way to describe music, but you’ll also 
> hear it used to refer to pace or speed in general, as in — "the 
> increased tempo at the end of a close basketball game" or "the slow 
> tempo of action in a novel."
> 
> Read more here:
> 
> https://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/tempo
> 
> 
> So here is my extended new poem:
> 
> 
> I am a white arab nor a yellow nor a negro
> 
> As my studio is wanting from you to follow
> 
> As my game is a more sophisticated tempo
> 
> As my Tattoo is saying to you a beautiful hello
> 
> As i am participating for you to this beautiful show
> 
> As my beautiful heart and soul are climbing far from above
> 
> Since it is as it is a morality of the right dose
> 
> Since it is as Liberty is coming with the right effort
> 
> Since Liberty is what we have to adopt
> 
> Since it is as it is coming from the Lord
> 
> Since Liberty is justice and love and order
> 
> Since my Love is not the mess of desorder
> 
> Since my soul is made of a beautiful scent of amber
> 
> And thus the blues is making me dance
> 
> As the life is also a game of chance
> 
> And thus the blues is making me chant
> 
> Like an Ant that is doing his paint
> 
> Because it is as it is as infinite as we are told
> 
> Because it is as angels are talking from above
> 
> Because it is as it is a descent from the Lord
> 
> Since even our mirror is telling us hello and good evening
> 
> Because it is our destiny that is coming
> 
> Because it is our past that is calling
> 
> Because the new and old is coming and going
> 
> Because it's like a good morning and good evening
> 
> Because it is as our destiny that is running
> 
> Because progress is exponentially stepping
> 
> As wisdom is like the King
> 
> As it is the way of morality my darling
> 
> 
> 
You're an idiot who needs to get both a blog and a job.

And your code crap.

Congrats. This makes you slightly below average.

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#9886

From"Apd" <not@all.invalid>
Date2019-04-16 23:37 +0100
Message-ID<q95lhg$1uqk$1@gioia.aioe.org>
In reply to#9883
"Chad" wrote:
> You're an idiot who needs to get both a blog and a job.

You're not too clever in full-quoting his nonesense. Please stop doing
that; I have him kill-filed.

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