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There is many ways to write a poem

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Hello,

Read this:


There is many ways to write a poem, but as you have
noticed that my poems are both poems of love and they are also 
"philosophical" poems, and how do i write them ? it is like listening at 
the wisdom of silence and i listening at the wisdom of the desert  and 
listening at the wisdom around us, it is a hindsight that i have on 
different situations and on humans etc and it permits me to write my 
poems and to extend them.. for example in my last poem, i was listening 
at the wisdom of silence and the desert and this has showed me the way
and this has learned me more on humans, that humans are like
a glass that needs to be filled with knowledge and perfection and 
experience and love and compassion etc. and this has to be guided by our
need to be diversity that is in accordance with morality
that is perfection at best as i have proved it in my previous
posts, this is why morality has to know how to be the
diversity of the "right" imperfections to give the right perfection, and
as you have noticed that morality that is perfection at best
is guided by our need of a decent civilization that avoids
at best savagery, this is why in my previous poem i have
wrote about "moderation" that is "faithful" to us and that
is wisdom, because also it is part of the essence of democracy,
and we can understand it because read  what i wrote about it in my 
political philosophy:

I think the success of  USA has to be that USA has to understand the
way USA is governed, take for example the separation of powers,
What is the separation of powers?

The U.S. Constitution set up three separate but equal branches of 
government: the legislative branch, or Congress, makes the law; the 
executive, led by the president, executes the law; and the judicial, or 
courts, interprets the law.

But we have to be smarter than that, the separation of powers is not 
"sufficient", so we have to be smarter and know that the legislative 
branch has to understand how to make the legislative branch successful !
look for example at USA , its congress is constituted with both 
conservatives and democrats, but this legislative branch has to 
understand a very important requirement that the legislative branch has 
to know how to be "moderation" to not cause violence or civil war
inside the system ! this is the key to success ! thus the legislative 
branch of USA has to avoid "extremism" that causes violence or civil war 
inside the system , so it has to know how to be "moderation" !


And i invite you to reread my new poem to understand more:

Here is my new poem that i wrote fast,
read it listening at the same time
to the following song:

Jean Ferrat, La complainte de Pablo Neruda

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FnT5rAd8cEY

Here is my new poem:


We are like a glass
Since we feel the desert
Since we feel the silence
Like the wind blowing
Like the cold and the hot
Like the day and night
It's with this contrast
That the sense guides our essence
Because diversity is also the path
Because diversity is also the light
So when I hear the wind
And when I look at the sun
I see your heart beating
Like the beat of the wings of the little birds
Because like the delicacy and like caresses
Moderation is faithful to us and it is wisdom
Because we are like a glass
Since we feel the desert
Since we feel the silence
Thus we are love and we are compassion
Like the wind blowing
Like the cold and the hot
Like the day and night
We are perfection and we are progress
Because diversity is also the path
Because diversity is also the light
So when I hear the wind
And when I look at the sun
I see your heart beating
Like the beat of the wings of the little birds
Because like the delicacy and like caresses
Moderation is faithful to us and it is wisdom



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.

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