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Re: Constructive Criticism

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On 01/08/2014 11:56 PM, jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com wrote:
> Hi, hows it going I've been self teaching myself python, and i typed up this small script now i know its not the best the coding is not the best but i would like to know of ways to make a small script like this better so all constructive critisim is Welcome.
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> Here is the link to the code
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>     " http://pastebin.com/5uCFR2pz "
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I'm not sure if someone already pointed this out, but imports only need
to be done once. Usually at the beginning of the file, but not always.
In your case I would say yes, at the beginning.

import sys
import time

def countdown(seconds):'
     # start at 'seconds' and count down with a for-loop
     for i in range(seconds, 0, -1):
         # print the current second (i)
         print('closing in {} seconds.'.format(i))
         # sleep for one second (no need to import time again).
         time.sleep(1)

# Example usage:
print('hello')
# Prints the countdown.
countdown(10)
sys.exit(0)
-- 

- Christopher Welborn <cjwelborn@live.com>
   http://welbornprod.com

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Constructive Criticism jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com - 2014-01-08 21:56 -0800
  Re: Constructive Criticism Paul Pittlerson <menkomigen6@gmail.com> - 2014-01-08 22:06 -0800
  Re: Constructive Criticism Ben Finney <ben+python@benfinney.id.au> - 2014-01-09 17:09 +1100
    Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-08 22:16 -0800
      Re: Constructive Criticism Mark Lawrence <breamoreboy@yahoo.co.uk> - 2014-01-09 07:03 +0000
  Re: Constructive Criticism Peter Otten <__peter__@web.de> - 2014-01-09 10:56 +0100
    Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-09 12:08 -0800
  Re: Constructive Criticism Christopher Welborn <cjwelborn@live.com> - 2014-01-09 14:54 -0600
    Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-09 13:05 -0800
      Re: Constructive Criticism Alister <alister.ware@ntlworld.com> - 2014-01-10 08:56 +0000
        Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-10 12:26 -0800
          Re: Constructive Criticism Chris Angelico <rosuav@gmail.com> - 2014-01-11 07:34 +1100
          Re: Constructive Criticism Mark Lawrence <breamoreboy@yahoo.co.uk> - 2014-01-10 21:24 +0000

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