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Re: Constructive Criticism

From Mark Lawrence <breamoreboy@yahoo.co.uk>
Subject Re: Constructive Criticism
Date 2014-01-09 07:03 +0000
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On 09/01/2014 06:16, jeremiah valerio wrote:
> On Thursday, January 9, 2014 12:09:17 AM UTC-6, Ben Finney wrote:
>> jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com writes:
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>>> Hi, hows it going I've been self teaching myself python
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>> Welcome to Python, and to this discussion forum!
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>>> and i typed up this small script now i know its not the best the
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>>> coding is not the best but i would like to know of ways to make a
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>>> small script like this better so all constructive critisim is Welcome.
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>> Some constructive criticism:
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>> * Please make an effort to write readable English here. A run-on
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>>    sentence like the above makes it seem as though you don't care enough
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>>    for our help to make your message easily readable.
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>> * Please paste the code in your actual message, rather than directing to
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>>    an ephemeral website. This is so that the discussion will always have
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>>    the code for context when later readers view it.
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>> Once you re-post your program and describe its purpose, I'm sure there
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>> will be some responses giving feedback.
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>> --
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>>   \         “My girlfriend has a queen sized bed; I have a court jester |
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>>    `\   sized bed. It's red and green and has bells on it, and the ends |
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>> _o__)                                         curl up.” —Steven Wright |
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>> Ben Finney
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> yea sorry about this screw up "i know its not the best the coding is not the best but" and i'm new to forums never posted so i will take all your input and re-post maybe later thank you.
>

Before you repost would you please read and action this 
https://wiki.python.org/moin/GoogleGroupsPython to prevent us seeing the 
double line spacing above, thanks.

-- 
My fellow Pythonistas, ask not what our language can do for you, ask 
what you can do for our language.

Mark Lawrence

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Constructive Criticism jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com - 2014-01-08 21:56 -0800
  Re: Constructive Criticism Paul Pittlerson <menkomigen6@gmail.com> - 2014-01-08 22:06 -0800
  Re: Constructive Criticism Ben Finney <ben+python@benfinney.id.au> - 2014-01-09 17:09 +1100
    Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-08 22:16 -0800
      Re: Constructive Criticism Mark Lawrence <breamoreboy@yahoo.co.uk> - 2014-01-09 07:03 +0000
  Re: Constructive Criticism Peter Otten <__peter__@web.de> - 2014-01-09 10:56 +0100
    Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-09 12:08 -0800
  Re: Constructive Criticism Christopher Welborn <cjwelborn@live.com> - 2014-01-09 14:54 -0600
    Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-09 13:05 -0800
      Re: Constructive Criticism Alister <alister.ware@ntlworld.com> - 2014-01-10 08:56 +0000
        Re: Constructive Criticism jeremiah valerio <jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com> - 2014-01-10 12:26 -0800
          Re: Constructive Criticism Chris Angelico <rosuav@gmail.com> - 2014-01-11 07:34 +1100
          Re: Constructive Criticism Mark Lawrence <breamoreboy@yahoo.co.uk> - 2014-01-10 21:24 +0000

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