Path: csiph.com!usenet.pasdenom.info!news.albasani.net!news.stack.nl!newsfeed.xs4all.nl!newsfeed1.news.xs4all.nl!xs4all!post.news.xs4all.nl!not-for-mail Return-Path: X-Original-To: python-list@python.org Delivered-To: python-list@mail.python.org X-Spam-Status: OK 0.000 X-Spam-Evidence: '*H*': 1.00; '*S*': 0.00; 'python,': 0.02; 'feedback.': 0.04; 'from:addr:yahoo.co.uk': 0.04; 'context': 0.07; 'sized': 0.07; 'welcome.': 0.07; 'lawrence': 0.09; 'received:80.91': 0.09; 'received:80.91.229': 0.09; 'received:gmane.org': 0.09; 'received:list': 0.09; 'sentence': 0.09; 'typed': 0.09; 'python': 0.11; 'language.': 0.14; 'posted': 0.15; 'finney': 0.16; 'readable': 0.16; 'received:80.91.229.3': 0.16; 'received:plane.gmane.org': 0.16; 'spacing': 0.16; 'prevent': 0.16; 'thursday,': 0.16; 'language': 0.16; 'wrote:': 0.18; 'discussion': 0.18; 'later': 0.20; 'thanks.': 0.20; '>>>': 0.22; 'input': 0.22; 'coding': 0.22; 'header:User-Agent:1': 0.23; 'url:moin': 0.24; "i've": 0.25; 'script': 0.25; 'header:X -Complaints-To:1': 0.27; 'header:In-Reply-To:1': 0.27; 'court': 0.30; "i'm": 0.30; 'code': 0.31; 'url:wiki': 0.31; 'wright': 0.31; 'writes:': 0.31; 'url:python': 0.33; 'actual': 0.34; 'maybe': 0.34; 'but': 0.35; 'there': 0.35; 'hi,': 0.36; 'url:org': 0.36; 'effort': 0.37; 'january': 0.37; 'easily': 0.37; 'thank': 0.38; 'ben': 0.38; 'ends': 0.38; 'to:addr:python-list': 0.38; 'rather': 0.38; 'sure': 0.39; 'to:addr:python.org': 0.39; 'enough': 0.39; 'received:org': 0.40; 'read': 0.60; 'above,': 0.60; 'new': 0.61; 'you.': 0.62; 'email addr:gmail.com': 0.63; 'myself': 0.63; 'our': 0.64; 'teaching': 0.64; 'charset:windows-1252': 0.65; 'forums': 0.68; 'readers': 0.68; 'bells': 0.84; 'curl': 0.84; 'girlfriend': 0.84; 'responses': 0.93 X-Injected-Via-Gmane: http://gmane.org/ To: python-list@python.org From: Mark Lawrence Subject: Re: Constructive Criticism Date: Thu, 09 Jan 2014 07:03:00 +0000 References: <8574fa07-af12-4e62-9cbc-3bd00802b6e2@googlegroups.com> <8aacf3b7-2e7f-4d74-80b1-faf3de09ac71@googlegroups.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Gmane-NNTP-Posting-Host: host-92-24-220-8.ppp.as43234.net User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.2.0 In-Reply-To: <8aacf3b7-2e7f-4d74-80b1-faf3de09ac71@googlegroups.com> X-BeenThere: python-list@python.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: General discussion list for the Python programming language List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Newsgroups: comp.lang.python Message-ID: Lines: 71 NNTP-Posting-Host: 2001:888:2000:d::a6 X-Trace: 1389251106 news.xs4all.nl 2887 [2001:888:2000:d::a6]:50433 X-Complaints-To: abuse@xs4all.nl Xref: csiph.com comp.lang.python:63577 On 09/01/2014 06:16, jeremiah valerio wrote: > On Thursday, January 9, 2014 12:09:17 AM UTC-6, Ben Finney wrote: >> jeremiahvalerio123@gmail.com writes: >> >> >> >>> Hi, hows it going I've been self teaching myself python >> >> >> >> Welcome to Python, and to this discussion forum! >> >> >> >>> and i typed up this small script now i know its not the best the >> >>> coding is not the best but i would like to know of ways to make a >> >>> small script like this better so all constructive critisim is Welcome. >> >> >> >> Some constructive criticism: >> >> >> >> * Please make an effort to write readable English here. A run-on >> >> sentence like the above makes it seem as though you don't care enough >> >> for our help to make your message easily readable. >> >> >> >> * Please paste the code in your actual message, rather than directing to >> >> an ephemeral website. This is so that the discussion will always have >> >> the code for context when later readers view it. >> >> >> >> Once you re-post your program and describe its purpose, I'm sure there >> >> will be some responses giving feedback. >> >> >> >> -- >> >> \ “My girlfriend has a queen sized bed; I have a court jester | >> >> `\ sized bed. It's red and green and has bells on it, and the ends | >> >> _o__) curl up.” —Steven Wright | >> >> Ben Finney > > yea sorry about this screw up "i know its not the best the coding is not the best but" and i'm new to forums never posted so i will take all your input and re-post maybe later thank you. > Before you repost would you please read and action this https://wiki.python.org/moin/GoogleGroupsPython to prevent us seeing the double line spacing above, thanks. -- My fellow Pythonistas, ask not what our language can do for you, ask what you can do for our language. Mark Lawrence