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| From | Nathan Ace <nathanace75@gmx.com> |
|---|---|
| Newsgroups | uk.local.kent |
| Subject | Re: Ditty ! |
| Date | 2020-10-08 11:25 +0100 |
| Organization | Netfront http://www.netfront.net/ |
| Message-ID | <rlmpef$1mie$1@adenine.netfront.net> (permalink) |
| References | <rf7mrn$apd$2@dont-email.me> |
On 21/07/2020 22:31, Patrick wrote: > There was a young lady from Kent > Whose nose was most awfully bent. > She followed her nose, > One day, I suppose, > And no one knows which way she went. Meaning to be helpful, but - I'd say either change nose to conk in line two or replace three and four with lines containing a bit more development of theme/ action? It's currently that you've brought this nose in in line two and then the word appears again in a sort of running on the spot effect in the next line. Do you see what I mean? I don't suppose it matters, and you're probably gone. I'm even a bit worried that you're me and that I posted that limerick during a rum blackout. Best wishes, L, Gravesend.
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Ditty ! Patrick <Patrick@invalid.invalid> - 2020-07-21 22:31 +0100
Re: Ditty ! Nathan Ace <nathanace75@gmx.com> - 2020-10-08 11:25 +0100
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Re: Ditty ! There's a much cruder version to this one. Somewhat Nostalgic <rogerbcarpenter@gmail.com> - 2020-10-09 07:22 -0700
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