Path: csiph.com!fu-berlin.de!uni-berlin.de!not-for-mail From: "Jason Alan Smith" Newsgroups: comp.lang.python Subject: Brief Code Review Please - Learning Python Date: Sat, 5 Dec 2015 13:35:04 -0600 Lines: 59 Message-ID: Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="US-ASCII" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Trace: news.uni-berlin.de C4RI0guF+XprpR6DcoW2Qg9hibjg9yV8azZcwhdlBOeA== Return-Path: X-Original-To: python-list@python.org Delivered-To: python-list@mail.python.org X-Spam-Status: OK 0.000 X-Spam-Evidence: '*H*': 1.00; '*S*': 0.00; 'python,': 0.02; 'subject:Python': 0.05; "'')": 0.07; 'correct.': 0.07; 'tests,': 0.07; '40,': 0.09; 'meaningful': 0.09; 'spreading': 0.09; 'surrounded': 0.09; 'underscore': 0.09; 'advance': 0.10; 'python': 0.10; 'def': 0.13; 'variables': 0.15; 'guide.': 0.16; 'measures': 0.16; 'received:io': 0.16; 'received:psf.io': 0.16; 'subject:Learning': 0.16; 'tabs': 0.16; 'stick': 0.18; 'tests': 0.18; 'fix': 0.21; 'aligned': 0.22; 'arguments': 0.22; 'subject:Code': 0.22; 'recognized': 0.24; "i've": 0.25; 'appreciated.': 0.27; 'skip:m 30': 0.27; 'not.': 0.27; 'question': 0.27; 'said,': 0.27; 'function': 0.28; 'skip:( 20': 0.28; 'pep': 0.29; 'received:dreamhost.com': 0.29; 'received:g.dreamhost.com': 0.29; "i'm": 0.30; 'code': 0.30; 'convention': 0.30; "i'd": 0.31; 'everyone': 0.31; 'changed': 0.33; 'class': 0.33; "i'll": 0.33; 'case,': 0.34; 'correctly': 0.34; 'editor': 0.34; 'skip:d 20': 0.34; 'list': 0.34; 'jason': 0.35; 'but': 0.36; 'skip:i 20': 0.36; 'lines': 0.36; 'beginning': 0.36; 'to:addr:python-list': 0.36; 'two': 0.37; 'charset:us-ascii': 0.37; 'brief': 0.38; 'feedback': 0.38; 'skip:p 20': 0.38; 'thank': 0.38; 'google': 0.39; 'sure': 0.39; 'to:addr:python.org': 0.40; 'some': 0.40; 'your': 0.60; 'skip:w 30': 0.64; 'below.': 0.66; 'exceed': 0.72; 'journey': 0.72 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed; d=qualityaddict.org; h=from :to:subject:date:message-id:mime-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; s=qualityaddict.org; bh=h4kxREV/tsWN RRMHhL4z02Ejt1w=; b=WKuQ00ESomN6GxYL5/FJLIawF6naecEVfhnL9rCDVxcY gb/Z7eCTlJ9ebRINIFeaA+cxJiG7HQdXxPAEgoqMiSz7huBT4IIo43waIG77P01I R3qqh+swV+KONQkRyVbiGRt1j1kJc0pPQ6O8ZZIeKFBgUZY7o/lRGBhPIXAulE4= X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 16.0 Thread-Index: AdEvk7zhwmuC2JtyRcadGguCvqE85w== Content-Language: en-us X-Mailman-Approved-At: Sun, 06 Dec 2015 15:18:45 -0500 X-BeenThere: python-list@python.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20+ Precedence: list List-Id: General discussion list for the Python programming language List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Xref: csiph.com comp.lang.python:100063 Hello List Members, I am beginning to learn Python, and I've adapted some code from Google into the function below. I'm also looking at the PEP 8 style guide. I'd appreciate a brief code review so I can start this journey off on a solid foundation. :) * I've already changed my editor from tabs to 4 spaces. * I've also set my editor to alert me at 72 characters and don't exceed 79 characters. * I've named the function and variables with lower case, underscore separated, and meaningful words. * I've surrounded this function with two blank lines before and after. * I just recognized I need to pick a quote style and stick to it so I'll fix that (" " or ' '). * I'm not sure about the WidthAndHeight on lines 16 and 17 regarding capitalization. If I understand correctly a namedtuple is a class so the CapWords convention is correct. * Is how I've aligned the function arguments on lines 1-4 and 22-25 good style or \ is spreading these out onto fewer lines preferred? * Same question as right above but with the if tests on lines 5-8. * I've also used ( ) around the if tests, but I'm not sure if this is good Python style or not. 1 def measure_string(desired_text, 2 desired_font_family, 3 desired_font_size, 4 is_multi_lines): 5 if (desired_text != '') and \ 6 (desired_font_family != '') and \ 7 (desired_font_size != '') and \ 8 ((is_multi_lines == "True") or (is_multi_lines == "False")): 9 with Image(filename='wizard:') as temp_image: 10 with Drawing() as measure: 11 measure.font_family = desired_font_family 12 measure.font_size = desired_font_size 13 measures = measure.get_font_metrics(temp_image, 14 desired_text, 15 multiline=is_multi_lines) 16 WidthAndHeight = namedtuple("WidthAndHeight", "Width Height") 17 width_and_height = WidthAndHeight(measures.text_width, \ 18 measures.text_height) 19 return width_and_height 20 21 22 print(measure_string("some text\na new line", 23 "Segoe UI", 24 40, 25 "True")) Any and all feedback is much appreciated. As I said, I'm just beginning to learn Python and want to start off with a solid foundation. Thank you to everyone in advance for your time and thoughts. Jason