Path: csiph.com!newsfeed.hal-mli.net!feeder3.hal-mli.net!newsfeed.hal-mli.net!feeder1.hal-mli.net!newsfeed1.swip.net!uio.no!news.tele.dk!news.tele.dk!small.news.tele.dk!newsgate.cistron.nl!newsgate.news.xs4all.nl!post.news.xs4all.nl!not-for-mail Return-Path: X-Original-To: python-list@python.org Delivered-To: python-list@mail.python.org X-Spam-Status: OK 0.000 X-Spam-Evidence: '*H*': 1.00; '*S*': 0.00; 'else:': 0.03; 'operator': 0.03; 'elif': 0.05; 'assign': 0.07; 'duplicate': 0.07; 'none:': 0.07; 'sys': 0.07; 'subject:help': 0.08; '%s"': 0.09; 'definition,': 0.09; 'except:': 0.09; 'input,': 0.09; 'logic': 0.09; 'main()': 0.09; 'properly.': 0.09; 'received:80.91': 0.09; 'received:80.91.229': 0.09; 'received:gmane.org': 0.09; 'received:list': 0.09; 'try:': 0.09; '"-":': 0.16; '"programming': 0.16; '999': 0.16; 'exit()': 0.16; 'inputs': 0.16; 'item)': 0.16; 'main():': 0.16; 'message-id:@4ax.com': 0.16; 'received:80.91.229.3': 0.16; 'received:plane.gmane.org': 0.16; 'sys.exit(1)': 0.16; 'true:': 0.16; 'values?': 0.16; 'applies': 0.16; 'exception': 0.16; 'wed,': 0.18; 'module': 0.19; 'passing': 0.19; 'programming': 0.22; 'import': 0.22; 'print': 0.22; 'error': 0.23; 'module,': 0.24; 'url:home': 0.24; 'second': 0.26; 'pass': 0.26; 'header:X-Complaints-To:1': 0.27; 'function': 0.29; "i'm": 0.30; 'skip:c 30': 0.32; 'worked': 0.33; 'third': 0.33; 'comment': 0.34; '"the': 0.34; 'could': 0.34; 'but': 0.35; 'add': 0.35; 'really': 0.36; 'charset:us-ascii': 0.36; 'too': 0.37; 'two': 0.37; 'level': 0.37; 'received:76': 0.38; 'work?': 0.38; 'handle': 0.38; 'to:addr:python-list': 0.38; 'skip:- 10': 0.38; 'previous': 0.38; 'does': 0.39; 'to:addr:python.org': 0.39; 'received:org': 0.40; 'how': 0.40; 'read': 0.60; 'skip:y 20': 0.60; 'skip:z 20': 0.60; 'numbers': 0.61; 'simple': 0.61; 'first': 0.61; 'more': 0.64; 'close': 0.67; 'invalid': 0.68; 'repeat': 0.74; '321': 0.84; 'again?': 0.84; 'max.': 0.84; 'lazy': 0.91; '2013': 0.98 X-Injected-Via-Gmane: http://gmane.org/ To: python-list@python.org From: Dennis Lee Bieber Subject: Re: Efficency help for a Calculator Program Date: Wed, 02 Oct 2013 19:47:15 -0400 Organization: IISS Elusive Unicorn References: <77bde84a-b0ce-4061-bb2e-e6cd23f4282c@googlegroups.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Gmane-NNTP-Posting-Host: adsl-76-249-20-155.dsl.klmzmi.sbcglobal.net X-Newsreader: Forte Agent 6.00/32.1186 X-No-Archive: YES X-BeenThere: python-list@python.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: General discussion list for the Python programming language List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Newsgroups: comp.lang.python Message-ID: Lines: 178 NNTP-Posting-Host: 2001:888:2000:d::a6 X-Trace: 1380757646 news.xs4all.nl 15891 [2001:888:2000:d::a6]:44468 X-Complaints-To: abuse@xs4all.nl Xref: csiph.com comp.lang.python:55391 On Wed, 2 Oct 2013 03:44:24 -0700 (PDT), JonDoe297 declaimed the following: > >global repeat This does nothing at the top level of a module >repeat=1 >def main(): > c=int(raw_input("How many numbers do you want to work? (Min. 2 Max. 3) ")) You don't handle the case where someone enter a non-integer item > if c==2: > x=int(raw_input("Enter the first number to be worked ")) > y=int(raw_input("Enter the second number to be worked ")) > elif c==3: > x=int(raw_input("Enter the first number to be worked ")) > y=int(raw_input("Enter the second number to be worked ")) > z=int(raw_input("Enter the third number to be worked ")) You duplicate the first two inputs -- yet by your definition, two is the minimum. And since 3 is the maximum... x = int(....) y = int(....) if c == 3: z = int(....) > else: > print "Invalid input.";raw_input("Press to close this window");exit() > p=int(raw_input("Do you want to divide, subtract, add or multiply these numbers? (1=divide, 2=subtract, 3=add, 4=multiply) ")) > if p==1 and c==2: > print "The result is : ",x/y > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==1 and c==3: > print "The result is : ",x/y/z > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==2 and c==2: > print "The result is : ",x-y > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==2 and c==3: > print "The result is : ",x-y-z > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==3 and c==2: > print "The result is : ",x+y > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==3 and c==3: > print "The result is : ",x+y+z > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==4 and c==2: > print "The result is : ",x*y > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > elif p==4 and c==3: > print "The result is : "+str(x*y*z) > repeat=int(raw_input("Do you want to calculate for more numbers? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > else: > repeat=int(raw_input("Invalid Input. Please read instructions properly. Would you like to try again? Yes=1 No=2 ")) > if repeat==1: > main() > else: > exit() >main() > Ack! way too many conditionals... Condense out the logic -- since you apply the same operator to all data you just need a way to pass the operator to a function that applies it to all the data. -=-=-=-=-=- import sys while True: try: numItems = int(raw_input("\n\nHow many values? ")) except: #naked exception is not really good programming print "Invalid input, exiting..." sys.exit(1) print numItems items = [] while len(items) < numItems: try: item = int(raw_input("Enter item #%s> " % (len(items) + 1))) items.append(item) except: #see previous comment print "Invalid input, try again" oper = None while oper is None: oper = raw_input("Enter operation [+, -, *, /]> ") if oper[0] in "+-*/": oper = oper[0] else: oper = None #note -- I'm too lazy to look up the operator module, but the #above could have used a dictionary look-up to assign the #actual function to oper, and then the following if-block #becomes a simple # cumulative = oper(cumulative, item) cumulative = items[0] for item in items[1:]: if oper == "+": cumulative += item elif oper == "-": cumulative -= item elif oper == "*": cumulative *= item elif oper == "/": cumulative /= item else: print "Programming Error -- operator is invalid after passing check" print "Cumulative result is %s" % cumulative -=-=-=-=-=-=- C:\Users\Wulfraed\Documents>oper.py How many values? 3 3 Enter item #1> 21 Enter item #2> 32 Enter item #3> 43 Enter operation [+, -, *, /]> + Cumulative result is 96 How many values? 4 4 Enter item #1> 999 Enter item #2> 321 Enter item #3> 123 Enter item #4> 42 Enter operation [+, -, *, /]> - Cumulative result is 513 How many values? 2 2 Enter item #1> 4737 Enter item #2> 121 Enter operation [+, -, *, /]> * Cumulative result is 573177 How many values? Invalid input, exiting... C:\Users\Wulfraed\Documents> -- Wulfraed Dennis Lee Bieber AF6VN wlfraed@ix.netcom.com HTTP://wlfraed.home.netcom.com/