Path: csiph.com!fu-berlin.de!uni-berlin.de!not-for-mail From: Peter Otten <__peter__@web.de> Newsgroups: comp.lang.python Subject: Re: palindrome Date: Tue, 17 Nov 2015 10:31:37 +0100 Organization: None Lines: 63 Message-ID: References: Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7Bit X-Trace: news.uni-berlin.de WsZvkbLjNkZIgrU5YU0j1ArH8mp+U+zQC+SNaTjGHtMg== Return-Path: X-Original-To: python-list@python.org Delivered-To: python-list@mail.python.org X-Spam-Status: OK 0.000 X-Spam-Evidence: '*H*': 1.00; '*S*': 0.00; 'else:': 0.03; 'tries': 0.05; '"__main__":': 0.07; '__name__': 0.07; 'executed': 0.07; 'main()': 0.07; 'rewrite': 0.07; 'conventions.': 0.09; 'received:80.91': 0.09; 'received:80.91.229': 0.09; 'received:gmane.org': 0.09; 'received:list': 0.09; 'python': 0.10; 'better?': 0.16; 'hint': 0.16; 'operators.': 0.16; 'pep8': 0.16; 'received:80.91.229.3': 0.16; 'received:dip0.t-ipconnect.de': 0.16; 'received:io': 0.16; 'received:plane.gmane.org': 0.16; 'received:psf.io': 0.16; 'received:t-ipconnect.de': 0.16; 'true:': 0.16; 'wrote:': 0.16; 'string': 0.17; 'script.': 0.18; '(the': 0.22; 'minor': 0.22; 'import': 0.24; 'module': 0.25; 'header:User- Agent:1': 0.26; 'header:X-Complaints-To:1': 0.26; 'coding': 0.27; 'function': 0.28; 'invoke': 0.29; 'spaces': 0.29; 'random': 0.29; 'print': 0.30; 'code': 0.30; 'candidate': 0.31; 'point': 0.33; 'running': 0.34; 'add': 0.34; 'could': 0.35; 'skip:i 20': 0.36; 'instead': 0.36; 'there': 0.36; 'url:org': 0.36; 'tool': 0.36; 'to:addr:python-list': 0.36; 'subject:: ': 0.37; 'received:org': 0.37; 'desired': 0.37; 'build': 0.40; 'to:addr:python.org': 0.40; 'where': 0.40; 'received:de': 0.40; 'called': 0.40; 'avoid': 0.61; 'reuse': 0.66; 'url:2014': 0.66; 'here': 0.66; 'ready-made': 0.84; 'seymore4head': 0.84; 'url:03': 0.84 X-Injected-Via-Gmane: http://gmane.org/ X-Gmane-NNTP-Posting-Host: p57bd8631.dip0.t-ipconnect.de User-Agent: KNode/4.13.3 X-BeenThere: python-list@python.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20+ Precedence: list List-Id: General discussion list for the Python programming language List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Xref: csiph.com comp.lang.python:98912 Seymore4Head wrote: > http://www.practicepython.org/exercise/2014/03/12/06-string-lists.html > > Here is my answers. What would make it better? 1. Break the code into functions: one to generate a random string (the desired length could be a parameter) and one to check if the string is a palindrome. With that the loop will become tries = 0 while True: tries += 1 candidate = random_string(length=4) print(candidate) if is_palindrome(candidate): break print(tries, "tries") 2. If you plan to reuse these functions put the above code in a function (let's call it main), too, that you invoke with if __name__ == "__main__": main() to avoid that the code is executed when you import the module instead of running it as a script. 3. For better readability add spaces around operators. There is a tool called pep8 that will point out where you are breaking the standard Python coding conventions. 4. Minor rewrites: 4.1 Can you rewrite the while loop as a for loop? for tries in ...: ... Hint 1: you can put a while loop into a generator Hint 2: there's a ready-made solution in itertools. 4.2 Can you build the random string using a generator expression and "".join(...)? > import random > str1="" > letcount=4 > count=0 > abc='abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz' > while True: > for i in range(letcount): > a=random.choice(abc) > str1+=a > print str1 > count+=1 > if str1==str1[::-1]: > break > else: > str1="" > print "Tries= ",count > print str1