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Subject: Re: i'm a python newbie & wrote my first script, can someone critique it?
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> On Jun 10, 2016, at 3:52 PM, mad scientist jr <mad.scientist.jr@gmail.com>=
 wrote:
> .=20
> Now that it's done, I am wondering what kind of things I could do better.

This is Python, not BASIC. Lay off on the CAP LOCK key and delete all the co=
mments and separation blocks. No one is going to find your code in all that n=
oise.

Chris R.=