Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6)

Subject	Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6)
From	will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery)
Date	2026-05-11 16:23 -0400
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Michael Pendragon <user17124> posted:

> Will Dockery <user3274> posted:
> 
> The poem is montage in poetry form, made up of a series of images:
> 
> Apple Montage
> 
> Sneaking around
> 
> Image ^^^
> 
> Wrong.  It's an action.
> 



The menthol cigarette is visible.

An image.


> with Cousin Jenny,
> 
> Image ^^^
> 
> Wrong.  She's a character.
> 



That's true, but the description of her is an image.

She's not invisible, I'm not invisible, the menthol cigarette isn't invisible, the barn behind us isn't invisible.

Several images right there.

Part of the montage in poetry form.

See JLA Forums attachment below for a photograph of Jenny (2nd from the left) to add to the context of the image.

HTH and HAND.


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Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6) Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> - 2026-05-11 07:06 +0000
  Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6) Michael Pendragon <user17124@newsgrouper.org.invalid> - 2026-05-11 19:52 +0000
    Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6) Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> - 2026-05-11 20:02 +0000
    Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6) Will Dockery <user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid> - 2026-05-11 20:07 +0000
      Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6) will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery) - 2026-05-11 16:23 -0400
      Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (Instagram poem #6) Michael Pendragon <user17124@newsgrouper.org.invalid> - 2026-05-11 22:40 +0000
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